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Rattlesnake Skin (Graphic)


His tongue forked, he is ready to strike again,
“you and your dagger women,”
he hissed from the inside of the house.
She has been lashed twice with his belt.
He did not stop her when the front door slammed.
Now a lunatic goddess crazed on a shadowed hillside
hysterically cutting moonlit rattlesnake skin.
She stabs her womb, she has wandered too far.
She does not see herself, she sees the snake. 
She does not want his baby inside her womb.

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  • julezz
    October 13
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    Wow. This is AMAZING. In a scary, graphic, intense way. Breathtaking writing.


  • Kastor
    October 12
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    Its scary and sad.


  • LovingAngelForever
    October 12
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    wow,.... ummm... This is really really good... Very, ah, descriptive. Wonderful write.