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Rainbow

I wish I could fly
High, up above the skyscrapers
and the stars, twinkling around the incandescent moon

I wish I could try
To be better at something
than winning ice cream from McDonalds Monopoly

I just want to be
More pure than the whitest snow
untouched by self conflict, war, and addiction

I want to show me
that I'm worth much more
than what I'm not letting myself have

Somewhere out there is my emotional meter
Controlled by something other than the sun in the sky
Someone out there will find it and take it for granted
shake it up and down, throw it to the ground
and I'll be left here, underneath a rain cloud
that will never produce
a rainbow.

Author notes

I have no idea where this came from, but I had a really bad day. And I've noticed that the weather completely controls my mood. However, if I'm working, regardless of the sun, it feels like a rainy day.

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  • PedestrianX
    October 11

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    Hahaha I really really loved this poem
    It cheered me up after actually feeling down for alot of the day
    it was just.. hopeful i suppose lol
    made me smile

    It was sort of a longing for perfection i think
    I don't know. thats just what i got from it
    Keep writing alicia. You're really good


    • Araknia
      October 11
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      aw. thanks jon. you being happy = me being happy. Have a good night.