I long for the white fluid to drip,
so endlessly.
Pouring over me like waves,
making my mouth water.
Waiting to taste,
a piece of heaven.
Watching the silkiness cover my face,
licking it up and needing more.
Who knew,
that milk
and cereal
could cause a rise
like this.
Author notes
Prompt: His gender spat on my face.
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie NOWW baby!!! # 25 by Mango Memories.
400 points, ended October 11, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Write Funny Poems by earthstar.
550 points, ended November 22, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, • Add to finalists list, or remove from contest
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haha. This one made me laugh. Totally was not expecting the ending
Congratulations on the silver trophy you won with this. You definitely earned it 
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hahahaha
oh em geezums. lol
that was hilarious.
its really not very appropiat...at first
especially for people with dirty minds
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Well, I will certainly see cerial in a different light now. lol!!!!!!This is great, short but a well planned and beautifully delivered piece. I wish you the very best in the contest.
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Wow this is a whole new description of mike and cereal could cause so much laughs . I would not have thought of this one not ever good use of creative thoughts.
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haha, you know.. when i first read this.. i totally went somewhere else until the end, which seems to be the point. But you did it very nicely LOL. Lovely piece.
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hahaha. i loved this. at first i thought you were talking about some other white stuff. starts with a c ends with a m.
very nice write. so unexpected.
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Haha! I didn't really know what to expect out of this as I read through it..lol
Nice write, though!
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omg. brilliant!
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Bait and switch.
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hahahah!
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