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new eyes.

it wasn’t enough for him to watch
to watch me tumble.
broken, eagle spread, head first into
a whole new mess;

consisting of
torn ligaments, and hammered heartstrings
from stretched emotions
lingering on
broken chords.

I know
that from the day I met you
that you gifted me
with the sight of
new eyes

and all the travesties
that they can
see.

writing. this is actually pretty terrible.

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