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muddled mittens

The doctor hitched my cut sand

A contest entry

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  • Melodies
    October 13
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    AWWWW... hahaha!

    Oh, your poor hand! Very good word play, good poet! Fun to read and admire your thinking.


    • cazzy71
      October 14
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      Thank you

      Thank you for your comment,I have had much joy reading many of the entries,what a great contest,what a wonderfully funny selection of entries.. Loved it. Thank you.