As I hold you,all I feel is cold
The feelings have died and the longing dissolved
No heart a flutter,no eyes full of joy
Just an emptiness ,that I cannot enjoy
Without the lust,the wanting,the need
This journey is over,for certain,indeed
Failed again,with love left aside
And once again,washed away,memories died
It may be for now,or forever,who knows
But happiness fades,as fast as it grows
Like the blooms of summer,there no longer pretty
And neither are you,goodbye,what a pity
What did you think
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My work
I wrote it,from my real life,from my mind. No copy cat style in this.
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Great stuff...
Great depth & emotional expression in a smooth flowing narrative that many can relate too...
Keep up the good work...
Well done!!!
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thank you
Thank you for reading and commenting on cold. It is always pleasing to know others are reading and taking an interest in my writes.
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well penned sad lines. the challenge of maintaining the heat that fires our relationships. nicely done.
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thank you
I am glad you felt enough about this piece to offer your views,I value all comments,and am truly grateful for yours.
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A sad write but very good! Nicely written! A true life cycle for some but still I hope that you find that loving warming feeling again! It truly is nice to feel!
Rey
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Great
Been there too. Well stated.
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Such a beautiful and powerful write.
Without the lust,the wanting,the need
This journey is over,for certain,indeedAmazing truth. So much beauty in so much sadness.
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