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Sunset With You

Sunset With You

Can I ride-into the sunset with you
Never mind-just what we may or not do
Let's just fly-into tomorrow so bright
Never mind what we do inside the night
Can I run-into a future of love
Can we rise-into the heavens above
Walk in peace-hand in a warm loving hand
We don't care what the law and the critics demand

There's a place where we're all the same
There's a place where there is no game to love
Just a hand in a hand and nobody is rising above
Hold me tight this special place
See the tears running down my face- no shame
I am so sick of this stupid and meaningless game
Hold me now
Now the time and forever is now-hold on
Hold me now 'til the night burns out in the dawn

Can we stay-locked up together in this
Cheek to cheek-held in a prison of bliss
What they say-it doesn't matter to me
You and I are love and baby we're free
Where to go-anywhere, it's all the same
Where we are-we'll just be glad that we came
Touching you-this is the way it should be
We'll never care for the ones that say they disagree

There's a place where we're all the same
There's a place where there is no game to love
Just a hand in a hand and nobody is rising above
Hold me tight this special place
See the tears running down my face- no shame
I am so sick of this stupid and meaningless game
Hold me now
Now the time and forever is now-hold on
Hold me now 'til the night burns out in the dawn

Author notes

Oops. I was researching lighting for heavy metal from concert footage. I accidently wrote a metal song. Forgive me?

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Comments

  • This was good, I enjoyed reading this. It was nicely written. Had a very nice flow too it. Thanks for entering and best of luck too you in the contest!


    • LarryATilander
      October 11
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      Thanks

      It was pretty much train of thought and not as structured as what I normally do.