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With Each Fallen Battle Lies Another Moment Never Lived



    It's something we all used to dream of; that feeling we once got at the thought of being eighteen and finishing our senior year of high school.


But that was meant for a far away future being that took place of our younger souls. We never thought of the reality of that period in our life ending.


It was never more than a hazy dream. But that's not true anymore.



    And each week the clock blurs together the inked lines of each ticked away day, forming nothing but an abstract painting of lost time.


No matter how hard we try to grasp the rope, to slow the falling of our youth, it always slips and leaves us with blistered palms proving our demise.

 

 

And with each fallen battle lies another moment we never lived.

 

 

 

    All we can hope for, is to enjoy the last few years, preserve every priceless moment, and live out each smile and ring of laughter.

 

 

Take millions of photos just for the fun of it, save the little things that made up our happy memories, and for once just take it slow.

 

 

 

For, in just a short time it'll all be gone. So let's dance like a moron to blaring music, make peace with adults, and just live.

 

 

     

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3. The years keep ticking by

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  • I'll miss you too when school lets out for the last time. :'[


    • MoonlitRoses
      October 25
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      Nah you won't miss me. Because we might end up going to Yale together
      Our friendship won't end with school. We'll always keep in touch


  • Topaze gold member
    October 24

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    Thank you for this fine entry in my contest, best wishes.


  • smitaanand
    October 15

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    Wwhat lovely lines dripping with zest for life and juvenility and life as well.Every word has come alive breathing, vibrant and pulsating with laughter and intense emotion more beautiful than can be colored like resplendent hueful rainbow that makes life all the more beautiful.Thanks for sharing this one it is a plthora of bliss and delight...


  • ClosedEyes
    October 13
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    Woowweeee!
    I dont know how to say how amazing this write is without repeating myself over and over like the other comment on your other SUPERDOOPERAMAZING writes.
    but basically.. its very good
    miss yoo my vampy sandwich! havnt talked in a while shocking!!
    but i see yo is still as talented as ever with writing.. good luck in the competition my loveee (:
    <3
    P.S Awesome bangs my dear!


    i said bangs ooh get me!

    • MoonlitRoses
      October 13
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      Hey my wonderful fishy
      Thank you!!!!!
      I appreciate it very much my loverly~!~!~!

      You said bangs. I have bangs.
      The girl with the bangs runs off to catch you, over the jello ocean, of course!

      • ClosedEyes
        October 13

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        Awwwh shucksss
        Erroh my dazzling vampy sandwich
        Your more than welcome! Im simply expressing the truth that lies on everybody's lips when they read this beautiful write!

        I did say bangs! You do have bangs!
        The girl who said bangs runs towards the girl with the bangs who is running to catch the girl who said bangs.. you know And of course over the jello ocean!

        <3

        • MoonlitRoses
          October 13
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          Thankies

          bangs!!!!!!
          the girl who is off to catch the other girl that said bangs is running over the jello ocean and her bangs are blowing in the wind and this makes the girl with the bangs upset so she stops and the girl who said bangs escapes from the girl with bangs who was chasing the girl that said bangs!!!!

          that was a lot of bangs!!!!!

          • ClosedEyes
            October 13
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            Thats was indeed a lot of bangs! I got a little confused there.. had to read it a couple of times
            I mean.. ahem. no i didnt. got it straight away. ahem. yeah. ahem.. :| run! LOL
            run straight into the arms of the girl with the bangs..
            oh dont start that again!



            <3

  • Kylie! This was amazing..

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