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Fall

Voices screaming,
Inside my head,
Repeating things,
You once said.

I hate to face,
That you weren't there,
I hate the fact,
You never cared.

What's the point in trying,
When you shut me down,
I end up crying.

Because all the lies,
I wonder why
I spend all my night crying.

I gave you my all,
It doesn't matter,
You just let me fall.

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  • Memmy-94
    October 11
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    Beautifully written ! xx
    I loved it xx

    Keep it up.

    Peace.
    Hugs and Luv.
    Hope and Healing.
    xxXxx