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tell me

Tell me what you are feeling.
I need to know.
Tell me what your body want me to do with it.

Talk to me as if you want me
to pick the grapes from the sticks
and feed you from it.

Touch me as I felt you hold me
at the end of the world.

Tell me to reach your heart
and your soul to find the dark
secret that you always try to hide
from me

what do you think?

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  • sonia 77
    November 12
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    wow..beautiful !!!!


  • XXbRiNgAxX
    October 11

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    "Tell me what yiur body want me to do with it" You need to fix that. It's confusing and doesn't flow... :-/