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confined.




with brass shackles, I secured you firmly to the insect and grime infested wall. Your eyelids fluttered delicately, shielding your pupils from all of your deepest fears. Once they opened, your eyes seemed to be the only thing capable of growing a pair and becoming fiery ovals of pure hatred and loathing.


I leaned forward tauntingly and laughed in your face, releasing little drops of spittle onto your ivory skin. Tonight, I had nothing to fear. Especially not a silly little boy that was pinned to a wall and was sweating like an onion. You growled and attempted to work against the shackles, but I knew how weak you really were. I have always known that the performance you put on day in and day out would eventually take a toll on you some day.


    Fortunately, that day was tonight.


-


I traced the outline of your jaw, stroking it playfully with vigor in my eyes. A bead of sweat was quickly making it's way down your temple, eager to escape the dangerous situation. I could feel your warm breath on my neck as I brought my lips to yours for the last time.


-


I've always been questioned about the last time that I saw you. My answers were never clear, but always completely honest. I knew that I was suspected to be the cause of your disappearance


        but it's not like there's any proof, right ?


Author notes

ahaha this was written for a quickie contest that was only supposed to be 30-50 words long

luckily, the judges were kind enough to give me some time to re-edit, so I was able to enter ! so yeah, here's my stupid poem.

the prompt was: restraint

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  • bunnyslasher157
    November 1

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    It's NOT stupid. In fact you've been invited to the next round.g ood luck and keep writing!


  • sora.
    October 27

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    this is flipping great.


  • zee91190
    October 24

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    Haha 30-50 words?? Seems like you lost count while telling your tale!
    Jokes aside,I liked your poem.It was frightnening,but at the same time held my curiosity. I just had to know what hapened next!
    A mesmerizing write & a job well done!


    • just weak hands
      October 24
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      aw thank you very much !
      yeah, I definitely get caught up in the moment sometimes. Luckily, I was able to save it and write a different one using a piece from this write and adding a new part ahaha !

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