with brass shackles, I secured you firmly to the insect and grime infested wall. Your eyelids fluttered delicately, shielding your pupils from all of your deepest fears. I knew that tonight I would end your pitiful excuse for a life.
thankfully, you didn't even have a chance to fight back.
Author notes
word- restraint
I tried not to overcomplicate things, but I have trouble with that ahaha either way, this really sucks.
and uhm yeah I TOTALLY FORGOT ABOUT THE WORD COUNT. :]
I re-edited.
50 words exactly.
sorry.
it sucks.
A contest entry
- Hurryyyyy.... you know... be quick =D by LeilaJayne.
700 points, ended October 11, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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wow. this was powerful.
well done, you are brilliant
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thank you so much !
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anytime
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This doesn't suck at all... it's actually really good. You chose the best bit
Thanks for editing it, and thanks for entering x -
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thank you, I really appreciate it :]
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Oh no... now we have another issue... it states 30-50 words... this is just a quickie contest... You can choose just a bit of it to enter if you want? and then add the rest back after the contest has been judged... Let me know before i start judging x
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done :/
it's horrible, but it'll do !
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This is amazing prose.
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thank you very much !
unfortunately, I'm an airhead and completely forgot that this was only supposed to be 30-50 words :] ahaha
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Heyy... i see you haven't written yet... i am delaying judging by 15 minutes, if you haven't completed by then i will have to go ahead without you
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