when the window shut itself
i tried to hold my place
to stand still -
and not melt
i apply myself like a crowbar
or another comparison that does not work.
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I'm intrigued by this poem but I can't seem to decipher what is going on. What window? What place? Why melting? I assume the last line refers to the "crowbar" in the line before, but I'm still lost, and I can't figure out how the title connects either. I'm be happy to hear an explanation.
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... wow i dont really know what to say this is really pretty and really strong. this is a beutiful peice, and i'm jealous of your writing talent displayed here! thank you for letting me read this!
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o.o how do you write so powerful? jeez..that's like..
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