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Drowning in Depression

Drowning in Depression...
Or so it seems...
A Razor Blade is my only Reccession...
Or so it seems...
Pain is my only Obsession...
Or so it seems...
Drowning in Depression...

Drowning in Pain...
Or so it seems...
Love, searing hurt...
Or so it seems...
Pain falling like Rain...
Blood dripping on the window pane...
Or so it seems...
Drowning in Pain...

Drowning in Fear...
Or so it seems...
Shedding many a frightened Tear...
Or so it seems...
Crying so hard...Until
The Emo's Eyeliner begins to Smear...
Or so it seems...
Drowning in Fear...

Drowning in Insanity...
Or so it seems...
The World is lost in Profanity...
Or so it seems...
Everyones become the Ultimate Perfidy..
Or so it seems...
Drowning in Insanity...

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