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Book Of Life

 

 

 

 

 

 

Gazing down upon the faithful few

ever studying the vast book of life

replaying happiness and sorrow

questioning elusive emotions

moist eyes remember the lost love

the one that should have been

but was not

 

 

 

Going through motions of daily life

trying so hard to let go of that memory

the haunting memories of that perfect love

sadly missed - forever remembered

 

 

why...

 

 

We bide our time on this planet of tears

envisioning the softness of missed kisses

a warm hand to grasp in the darkness

smoothness of bodies intermingled

 

 

 

Living each day of this life pretending

we can endure the ache of loneliness

turning each page in our book of life

realizing too late the actions required-

love’s desire is a difficult flame to snuff

 

 

 

I will always remember

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    October 29

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    excellent~

    This is beautiful
    Filled with such emotion
    Tugged at my heartstrings
    Best of luck in the contest
    It's a winner in my book
    Hugs
    Your sis
    Susan~~~~


  • Desire gold member
    October 14

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    Wow~

    Oh My~ this is one Brilliant piece Sweet One~
    You know when I inhaled Your Energy~
    I could not help but cry but also smile
    for You Bless me in more ways than one
    and to read from Spirit~
    just swells the eyes even more
    Bravo!

    You have a way with words that can't be beat~
    I Adore and Love You so much
    This is a Beauty~ Emotion filled
    Keep that quill dancing
    Thank You for sharing Your Voice Beautiful
    Best wishes in the contest~
    with love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Denerica silver member
    October 11

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    Beautiful, deep emotions, either wanting to stop time or turn it back, and still try to move forward is definately felt in your excellent write. Blessings.


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    October 11

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    You just getting better by the minute!
    A very deep and emotional poem. You are
    so damn talented. You blow me away.
    I think this is Gold.

    Jeannie


  • XXbRiNgAxX
    October 11

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    This was a very wonderful read, and the photos added just the right touch.


  • Mountain Woman gold member
    October 11

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    Really beautiful and well written. So many great lines...

    You captured so much emotion here.

    Thanks for the write
    MW

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