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Decoy Dream

Dwindling above my head
Erasing what I used to believe
Compiling into something new
Or destroying the clearer view
You cast this blindfold over me

Don't perceive the truth now
Reaching for the stars is what I intend
Even when all I see is a faded black
All it does stand for and all it will be
My treadmilling strife; the decoy dream.

Honesty is my future's savior

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  • myusikah
    October 13

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    Wow. Talk about an acrostic. That's beautiful, Nalyn!
    Is this how you're feeling now?

    Hmm. You'd think that I would notice that you wrote a new poem. I log in like everyday to check if I have any new notes...

    I really like the stanza for Decoy.

    -->pia♫♪