Spent my life looking for my mind
i found my sight by being blind
memories seep through my veins
all my life i've been insane
I found myself by getting lost
even though i knew the cost
Dancing with these crimson devils
keeping my heart and soul level
i found my love with the lost and hated....
Author notes
just a quick abstract write...
about how i found myself when i found my friends
tell me how this made you feel
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For some strange reason I heard Slipknot in my head as I read this. Lol.
But I love this piece. I envy your way with words. The ideas you have. Simple yet amazing. Keep it up
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Spent my life looking for my mind
i found my sight by being blind
memories seep through my veins
all my life i've been insane"
flows really well Case. :-)
and where may I ask did you catch this piece of inspiration?
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Wow, I love this! "I found my sight by being blind" is a gorgeous line and I'm jealous because I didn't think of it first. I love the slightly paradoxical feel of this, beautiful! (and totally bookmarked)
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"Dancing with these crimson devils
keeping my heart and soul level"
These are really awesome lines. But the whole write is good. Love it!
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Another great read. I look forward for more.
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As always
Beautiful <333333333
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wow:]!
your poem is so amazing, Casey, it left me speechless. keep it up. im so proud of you. and, stop "cheatin on me" lol [inside joke}
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