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Hostile

Don't try to fix me,
Im already to broken.
Don't try to change me,
I've already spoken.

Lay down these hopes,
Wipe off that smile.
Stop talking to me,
Like I'm a hostile.

Don't act like you know me,
Like you did once before.
Don't tell me what to do,
Just to settle a score.

You abandoned me,
To start your own journey.
Left me alone,
On a god forsaken gurnee.

Broken and bleeding,
I called out your name.
Did you find that amusing,
Like this was a game?

So don't you dare try to fix me,
Im way to broken.
Life isn't a game,
That you play with a token.

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  • beauty from ashes
    October 12
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    this is really good
    I'm sorry people are stupid.