When I look at your exquisite face
I see those dazzling crystal tears
forming in your passionate eyes.
You're heart is radiating 'n warmth
that will scorch even the goddess
that created the burning of love.
I see your full, moist, crimson lips
tempting, like a broken open quince,
yet still innocent and vulnerable.
Your raven black hair hanging low,
shimmer in the fresh morning light,
a scent of jasmine lingering about.
Your skin is warm against my hand,
it feels like a feathery cloud of silk.
Your picture awakes a fluttering,
deep down inside my heart of hearts .
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E M E R A L D - S P I R I T Note: A quince is: an aromatic apple-shaped or pear-shaped yellow or orange fruit that is edible.
Comments
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Intresting. It shows the longing and the love of a boy who you described very well
good job!
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Your thought structure to conceive HIS form is very beautiful and quite logical as well..what it seems to me here. Very well done my friend...
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