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Everything Must Go

My mind is being cleared
Of all the things I used to know,
Everything must go,
Most recent first.
Hummm... what was I doing???
Was I writing verse???

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  • myrataal silver member
    October 11
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    Hallo Mike ...

    Do not forget me ... not forget me ... forget me ... me ...



    Please let all go silently.

    Love
    Myra

    • Michael Dennis Rivers
      October 12
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      Hi Myra
      No, I'll not forget you! I think it's just part of the ageing process... I hope! You know... how your short term memory is the first to go... just a part of getting old...
      "nothing gold can stay." Frost

      Mike