Music raises to the skies
So beautiful and free
Gliding over clouds and trees
Singing in harmony
People look up full of awe
A sound so pure and glorious
The song is sung for me
Please tell me what you think
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MUSIC!!! I love music(even though you already know that!!!)!!!!!!!!
Lol. Once again this is a short poem but it is wonderful. Music is one of the best things in God's creation and I love the picture you painted here of it gliding over the land for everyone.
Great job!!!


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Sweet and touching, a song of beauty itself


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Sounds like a poem about defeating something, or overcoming something in a triumphant way. Powerful.
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awwwww this is so sweet i love it very good it may be short but it has lots of emotion and gets ur point across
keep up the great writting
Stephanie



