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Sing for Me

Music raises to the skies
So beautiful and free
Gliding over clouds and trees
Singing in harmony
People look up full of awe
A sound so pure and glorious
The song is sung for me

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  • PianoMan
    October 17

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    MUSIC!!! I love music(even though you already know that!!!)!!!!!!!! Lol. Once again this is a short poem but it is wonderful. Music is one of the best things in God's creation and I love the picture you painted here of it gliding over the land for everyone. Great job!!!


  • She burns
    October 12
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    Sweet and touching, a song of beauty itself

  • Condor56
    October 11

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    Sounds like a poem about defeating something, or overcoming something in a triumphant way. Powerful.


  • Eveybodys-FOOL
    October 11

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    awwwww this is so sweet i love it very good it may be short but it has lots of emotion and gets ur point across
    keep up the great writting

    Stephanie