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Broken Hearted /Broken Glass Heart/

I've got this black glass heart.
I've taped it so many times...
Over and over,
But the pain keeps on
Puncturing it...
Again and Again.


I shouldn't've trusted you from
The very beginning, the start.
So now, here I am, broken hearted.
And flowing out these stupid rhymes.


All I wanted was a friend;
You gave me way to much more.
I loved you until the end...
But now I must settle the score.
Some how I will and nothing more.


I've got Heart Shaped scars
Traced by my trusty razor.
I'm leaving the skin you kissed
Imperfect and marred.
My smile, it looks so real.
God, I'm the perfect impersonator.
I'm impersenating a happy person;
But My heart is shattered.
I've got Love driven into my wrist.
But the love we had wasn't true.


So here I am...Sitting alone...
Tears falling, mixing with eyeliner
To make a slight gray flood.
And here I am...
With scarlet red blood
Falling off my Alabaster pale wrist.
And mixing with the blood of my
Broken Glass Heart.

Author notes

Hn. I had just gotten my heart broken by someone I loved so much, but they didn't love me back. Quite common, no?

Be gentle; I'm healing. But do give some citisism.

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Comments

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  • The Devil18
    November 5
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    wow this is sad an really good i can feel all the emotion u put in it nice work

  • The Devil18
    October 30
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    this is good i love it


  • SheWolfNLust silver member
    October 13

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    simply amazing, awesome poem I can feel every emotion and know it was written from your heart as well as the sadness you hold within, I totally can relate as my heart has been broken this bad just a little over a year ago, I am still trying to heal but am doin much better,I very much loved this poem and ty for sharing

    • Thank you, again. I do try, but I'm amazed so many people think I'm good. I'm glad you're doing better.


  • xxfallenawayxx
    October 11
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    amazing but sad i feel like crying now

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