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Lines

Rich color raises upon,
heartbroken despair.

Once a dark corridor,
seems opened with fresh air.

Longing for forgiveness,
only brings nothingness.

Lines from depression fade,
as the sun begins to raise.

Life has an aura again,
and I am ready to live it.

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I don't know...I like it for some reason... not one of my best, but it has caught on with me.

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  • Coloured Skies
    October 11

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    Yeah I agree with you, I like this piece too. It holds something special, and you deffinatley capture the emotion in each stanza and I thought everything was put together nicely! I hope you're alright!