When you think of me,
do you see my smile
how it seems to get brighter
when we're together awhile?
When you think of me,
can you see my eyes
filled with love
I can't disguise?
When you think of me,
can you see my form
softened with your touch
aroused and warm?
Do you find comfort
when you think of me,
knowing right beside you
I'll always be?!
Do you...
think of me?
Author notes
Just thinking...
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A contest entry
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I love this. It reminds me of a song I love!!!
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I love this! Love the rhyme, playful, longing.
Nicely done, hun!
Kris
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This was a nicely written piece you had here. It had a amazing flow too it as well. I enjoyed reading this. I liked the forth stanza. I liked all of this. Keep up the good work.
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hell yeah i do all the time but if this isnt for me well doesnt matter coz i do think of you heaps and nicely lovely work here bless you Donna
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Very nicely done... Love the structure and rhyme play... This plays across through so many universal emotions eventually felt by all: happiness, vulerability, sensuality, doubt, wonder, and most importantly, love... Playful and powerful... Well done... Thanks for sharing!!!
Peace,
Russell
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