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Moonlight Cast A spell

I fell under your spell as the moonlight danced
Golden rays led me into  your tender seduction
In this enchanted moment our lips touched
My heart raced lost in ecstasy
Flesh joined in a dance of pleasure
Erotic mist of lust filling the night

Vapors of our passion rise slowly
Aglow under misted moonlight
Breathless my lips taste your desire
Tasting sweet waves of your pleasure
Unfathomable silence moans of joy
Permeates the gauzier fabric of our desire

Your flesh slowly satisfy my desires
As we dance to a symphony of moonbeams
Underneath me you succumb with
Caress of soft curves engulfing me
Sharing tender moans of pleasure
Moonlight glow watches over us

Guiding our lips and fingers to the path
Which awakens every desire
Leading each loving touch into
Breathtaking kisses of rapture
Warm feelings of orgasmic bliss
As moonlight washes over our flesh

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  • lovlilmystery
    October 29

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    Such an exquisite piece. Can't say as I have read anything, that would come close to comparison. The senses real from how vivid the words come across, as though alive and meant to feel them. I loved this piece and can't say as I would change anything. Thank you for sharing. Take care and have a great day.

    Sandi

  • aychellus gold member
    October 28

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    wow this blew me away!! vivid imagery , cracking metaphors, carefull wording, tender and loving. hats off great read! bellisimo!!!


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    October 18

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    your work is just so steamy

    and very detailed in all the right

    area's, romantic, romantic !!

    loving it!!

    love & blessings

    ~Rend


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    October 11

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    I inspired this???????
    Holy moly love this was
    absolutely awesome
    I enjoyed every stanza.
    Thank you for sharing
    this with me,
    Lovely work Moonlightdragon


    Passions


    • SummerlandRayne gold member
      October 12
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      So very enchanting...your words cast a spell on the senses! Such tender passion and luscious sensuality. I adore the way you married nature and sexuality in this wonderful verse!

      Love you~



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