i wonder if she noticed me
sitting all alone
watching while her "man"
rules her like a drone
i wonder why i couldnt see
it must be that im dumb
that all her feelings for him
makes mi completely numb
it may be that im jealous
it may that im sad
but the way that he treats her
makes mi really mad
What did you think
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woooow i love this poem... it relates so well to a lot of people out there. gr8 write
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sweets
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this was really nicely written. it was a pleasure to read this. i am sure that some people can relate to this piece. it was very good. i enjoyed it. thanks for the read and keep up the good work!
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i like it its very nice
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awww...
That's cute ... I really like it.. and i knwo hwo you feel...before I met you there is a guy I have really liked and He started dating this girl that treats him like crap. She makes him buy her stuff and because he thinks he loves her he will do anything... she treats him like crap and I was jealous of her and the way she treated him just made me mad... so I understand... but now I am yours so it's okay... I Love You Anthony!
Always and Forever,
Karlie
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