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Man Inside

My heart still races
when I look upon you
I admire your beautiful graces
I long for you
amd your affectionant praises

I want to yell "Look at me"
when you look away
please smile even if it isn't for me
the face I see is only a facsimily

They can't take away my feelings inside
they can't take my love for you
I may have to wear this
ugly disguise
I close my eyes
I see your beautiful smile
I close my eyes
they will not change the man inside

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  • luv2dream gold member
    October 12
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    "I may have to wear this
    ugly disguise" why wearing an ugly disguise....this was a very sweet poem. just wondered about that.