It isn't all we thought
It isn't all we wanted
But life gives us a path
and we learn to guide it.
Author notes
Life gives us a way and sometimes we fallow and sometimes we stray its up to us all to chose!
Picture by : Elen Adudina
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wow
profound and deep -
A thought provoking & lovely poem !
Try not to make , a mistake on
which path we take .
It' up to us the choice we've got .
What path we take , could mean a lot .
Splendid read thank you Tanya !!
Best wishes & hugs , Friend Easy
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A thinking poem indeed...
Tanya I really like what you have here. You are growing as a poet. It is not how much we say but what we say. You have captured it. Bravo!
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I like this, but life is all I thought it would be. When I was a wee bit younger I never believed in me self.
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Your wisdom is unmistakable to me in this piece. We can learn to guide it indeed, that is the wisdom so many miss in their life. We do have the ability to choose, even when life plants tragedy in our path, or hurt, or love. Wonderful writing.
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Simple and provoking
What a short and very suscinct write.
You induce so much thought with this piece.
My reaction is to sit and ponder............
Dave
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This is a thinking poem for all to see in their own way or for what they don't see and need to. People read poems different and I love to hear what they see in my words. Thank You So much For Reading!
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