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Across The Pond

A new chill is rolling
in from an unknown sea
that separates us,
just a skip across
the pond
they call it,
but this pond never ends,
waves stirring up
from the depths,
crashing on our shores.

So I write
this for you now,
sealing it in a tiny bottle,
a single cork to hold
in everything I am,
everything I will give
to you, and I toss
it out to sea,
a simple hope
is all I have to know
that you will get this,
that you will get me.

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  • ApollosMuse
    November 14
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    wow...heart achingly beautiful!!

  • What a painful write this is. Very feeling and very well done. Thank you for entering.