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My heart is broken, my mind is fractured.

My heart is broken.
It shattered the day you left, and i would never again get to  kiss your soft lips.

My mind has fractured,
its like a broken record.
running a constant loop of the last loving words you spoke to me.

Even my nose has been corrupted by you.
Every breath i take in i can smell you in the wind.
the sent of your warm cologne plagueing my sences.

I cannot eat,
for fear that i will forever lose the taste of you from my mouth.

I cannot sleep,
for in my bed lies the ghosts of our love,
They attack my body as soon as i touch the sheets.

I cannot breathe,
because your leaving took the breath from my lungs.

without you my life has turned clouded,
I cannot see through this haze your love has cast about me.

so i sit with my brain in a haze, my thoughts all clouded,
and my eyes shrouded,
as i watch your image slowly fade away.

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  • I have no comment that would explain what this write made me feel and see. Very well done I loved it!