Why do you have your head in that hole?
Theres a beautiful world outside just waiting to unfold.
Cant you see the stars above?
What about the pearly wings of that lone little dove?
Why must you focus on darkness and hate?
If you dont pull up soon it will be far to late.
Your in a nose dive headed for destruction,
Your methodical decline makes it appear as if your following some instruction.
I could help you if you would only allow,
I would roll you over, open your heart somehow.
I would fill your mind with the wonders of the world,
And watch as your beautiful smile unfurled.
Author notes
thought it would be longer. apparently my mind had other ideas.
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The theme is setting, you have a strong will for words and create an attractive image to focus on, however I did find the question over used. I thought you could re-word them as less questions and more statements to get back some flow and less thinking on the question itself.
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