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Timeless Clouds

When I look at the sky,


I see the clouds moving.


I have no power to make them stop.


No power to pause time and think.

I can just look up and use the time I have.

Sadly the time I have is not enough for all the problems I think about.

 

I'm wishing for a slower moment,

A non-existing tomorrow.

 

All the thoughts I have cannot be expressed,

For I have no time to show them.

 

They then build up and overflow into a feeling of confusion.

So overwhelming that I can't see anything coming.

 

I'm scared, I'm lost, I'm waiting for a moment.

A moment in which I will once again be able to see the clouds moving.
 

And when I can breathe a sigh of relief.

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  • Shine216
    October 13

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    I feel the same way about what this says. I mean every word is exactly how I feel, I guess we must read minds lol. Anyway, I love it it's great. You look at the world in a very unique way, and that's really cool. Anyways love ya sis bye

    - Rebecca (Your little sister)


  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    October 11

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    Welcome to Allpoetry!

    The clouds move through the world and whilst we have no power to cease these things, we do have the ability to simply watch them pass by... simply exquisite.

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