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victoria

your are so dark and mysterious
and so beautyful and refine
so many great qualities
i dream for you to to be mine

to see you smile and laugh
to see you cry and to feel
your heart die is the reason
i want you to be mine

to know your life is a mess
to help out when you are
stressed to see that you have
a strong willed mind and to
still have a great out look in
life is why i want your heart
to melt with mine

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  • evershine-90
    October 21

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    This is a beautiful dedication to your ladylove, wonderful work. It's very heartwarming piece. keep it up and great work on this!


    • EvansV
      October 21
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      thank you

      thank you your comments sorry for not being online ive been busy with victoria but i have so much new stuff ill be on to read everyones work soon


  • Blissfullhatred silver member
    October 11
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    this is nice

  • amen..well this is the prayer of the lovers heart..wonderful emotions..and great feelings for the love...the last line is beautiful ly stated..well done...


    • EvansV
      October 11
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      thanks

      please read any of my works and comment i will do the same have a great day

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