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Suffocation's Palace

Whispers vanish in silent screams,
Strangling the years of wasted dreams,
In gardens lie the withered taste,
Of youth devoured in a moment's haste.

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  • rinzurajan
    November 15
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    is it some form of poetry or a few rhyming lines...???

    i loved the way u introspected...

    good luck