let me mend your broken heart
i can fix what he tore apart
ill be the bandaid for the start
ill put you together piece by piece
my ears will take in your hurt
i will wipe your tears from your eyes
my arms will comfort you when you cry
when i get to do these things
i know i will heal your broken heart
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Fix it then
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beautiful and touching! the emotions and love in this piece is heartfelt, perhaps you could make it longer, dig a bit more deeper? overall its a great write, good job!
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Hwaling the broken heart is the most sacred work of the universe....I love this work..I love the end of the poem a well ..it is a re-begining of the life..well done..
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thank you oh kind sir your comments mean a lot what would be your best work so i can read it let me know
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