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Broken Adjectives

I saw an empty room

I saw the rain that fell upon your lips
Fade into obscurity

These colors are just reflections
Upon tinted glass
And shadows are just tricks of the mind

Egotistical water droplets and singeing lies
Metaphorical proof
That you couldn't see past human obstacles


Barricaded eyes

Words whispered from besotted ears

To borrowed mouths

 

Anemia aches drained bodies

Just as cancer riddles muscles

We're just eko's of our own dyslexia 

 

Printed pages and words of lesson

move and rithe to unseen shadows

Were just tricks of our own safeguarded minds

 

 

Embodiment of a sleeping dormancy

Set out with whitened hands 

Of withering joy and eyes of fading light;

 

"Magdelena sleeps"

 

 

Author notes

i have always loved the line 'Magdelena sleeps' from your poem hassan :}

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  • oldschoolhero gold member
    October 28

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    fade into obscurity = brilliant

    egotistical water droplets? interesting, the way you think is cool ;DD
    and ohh myyy
    ;DD


  • PuRfekly-Phlaw3d
    October 13

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    wonderful. as always

    that was great i loved it
    'We're just eko's of our own dyslexia"
    is my favorite line..