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victorias world

when your not in my sight
my day light turns to night

when i dont get to hear
of your day of what you said
or what you did what made you
smile or sad and blue my life
turns grey without you

when i dont get to touch your hand
or give you a hug or kiss your
butterfly tattoo or just to snuggle
next to you my life has no meaning
without you

so when i dont get to enter your
world my world doesnt fully
revolve till i enter yours

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  • evershine-90
    October 28

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    awww, beautiful indeed. very touchingly penned, the beauty of love described in a very innocent and devoted way. love this! great job!

  • Yes It is true..without the touches to the lover..how can one live with at ease..it is a universal thought and brought with a beauty in it..well done...


    • EvansV
      October 11
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      thanks you for your comment

      i thank you once again for taking time to read my stuff and this woman i write for
      is a lovely lady and for three weeks its been great i hope she is the one for me i will be over to your site to read your work thanks evans