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Midnight Shadows

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Shadows define my existence.

The putrid odor of dank,

damp stone rules my world.

 

I wait,

quietly,

patiently.

 

This perversely dark labyrinth,

endlessly wandered

in search of escape.

I crave to be released into the

world of the living once again.

 

Even after uncounted years,

the excruciating thrill of feeling

an innocent life drain away haunts me.

 

The smell of fear,

of life essence dissipating,

lingers in my nostrils

like the delicate scent of…

     …of panicked sweat.

 

Breath quickens as I hear precious sounds,

a click,

a creak,

the cry of an ancient hinge.

 

   Do they know?

   

      Oh, they shall…

 

Free at long last

to roam the misty moors,

the dark woods,

the silent, sleepy homes.

 

   You shall know me.

 

I will speak your name

from the darkness of your peaceful slumber.

As softly as a bird’s heartbeat,

I will whisper in your ear.

 

You’ll think it to be a dream,

yet it shall become reality

for one brief moment in time.

 

   One glorious moment in time!!

 

Your choked screams,

mingled with my laughter,

echo across the night.

 

Eyes wide with stark recognition…

 

You shall know my face.

 

 

 

        Reflected from the moonlit mirrors

        of your midnight shadows.

 

 

               

 

 

 

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  • Rheea gold member
    October 22

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    dark and well haunting ..I came to see what was new and you scared me!


  • shattered.frisco
    October 20

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    that stupid skull at the botom
    made me jump and nearly scream when i saw it.
    i love the poem, very vivid imagery
    and intensely penned words.
    i enjoyed this one


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    October 18

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    excellent

    Wow
    Very dark deep and haunting....
    Love the poem and the imagery as well
    Also nice to meet you.........hope you come give mine a read as well
    I entered this contest too
    Best of luck in the contest
    Hugs
    Susan~~~


  • glenn shannon silver member
    October 17

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    holy molly changeof underwear required here and that face atthe end chilled me to my bones damn excellent unlike your usuall but brilliant indeed


  • LdyBrknWing gold member
    October 16

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    Whoa!!!

    This is a really fabulous dark write! As I told someone earlier this morning...though disgustingly cheerful myself, I tend to be drawn toward "dark" writing; especially in poetry. This was MOST satisfying. Your picture set off the piece to perfection, letting the reader know, even before the first word, that this would be a chilling write. Wonderful work, Poet!


  • rbruce gold member
    October 11

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    I sincerely hope this is written for the contest. I feel like Night Hope and want to run away.
    Defifitely dark and haunting.


  • Night Hope gold member
    October 11

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    Eeek!!! *runs away into the shadows*


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