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The Kill

Over kill,
Buzz kill,
Just Kill -
Me, myself, and I.

No one's here to stop you;
No one's here to save me.
So go ahead, do your deed!
Just until I'm dead.
Will that be all you need?

How's it feel, what's it like?
Who you kill? It's your delight.

What does this remind you of? Critisism works too :]

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  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    October 11

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    Welcome to Allpoetry!

    This made me consider the way that we kill ourselves. The things that we do in life and how that can kill our own thoughts and beliefs. I found that in "me myself and i"

    I think that it's important to look at our fears and the things that we are unsure of and conquer them to continue living.

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