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Not Done.

I lied to you my dear friend
By promising I would be free to the end
And give up my evil ways
But I kept on going, going for days
Days turned to weeks, months, years
Until finally one day the end drew near
I looked in the mirror and hated what I saw

Author notes

This is a follow up of my older poem "Fade to Black As the Sun Goes Down"

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • SpydurPoet gold member
    October 11

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    powerful emotions and imagery here. you did a fantastic job on this, even through the sorrow.
    write on.
    ~*~SP~*~