She is only clay,
night's evil at play
A shell cut away
Empty, all was taken
Shifting sands will wash away
her flesh
This shadow shape of a body that lays
A contest entry
- What is her story? by LisaRowe.
1400 points, ended November 6, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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short and nice, good background choice. thanks for entering.
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C, I like the concise wording... no fooling about with the meaning you got from the pic. Good and strong the harsh reality of your poem.
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This was a good read, little short, and would have loved to read more,, but your wording was good, and you really started to paint a dark picture..
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Very Good
A thousand stoies for this prompt, you have the likely one. She reminds me of a woman I saw tossed out of a van onto the road once.
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