The hillside's dew, pearled
like the sky against my skin ~
and I heard
Spring in verses,
lifting the meaning of you;
carried by the wind...
and your words ~
spoken in tones of April -
... go unnoticed
until the cool cloak of bracing air
wraps itself from leaf to flower
folding me into thoughts...
... I may still remember to need you ...
Author notes
Image credit: "me be me" by Faithfulx
A contest entry
- Click 62. by perfectsunset.
750 points, ended October 24, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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"until the cool cloak of bracing air
wraps itself from leaf to flower
folding me into thoughts...
... I may still remember to need you ..."
I really like your reference to nature in your work it is always so interesting.
Your writing is always soft,and beautiful like wisps of clouds on a summer day.
Great job.
You never disappoint.
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This was so awe-inspiring.
Deeply scribed with the greatest
of intentions and depths.
So much can be discovered
within this piece.. at the
very core of it.
Astonishing work!
Best of luck & thanks for entering
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Perfecto
I am pleased to have "click" you on this posting. It is meaningful, well crafted, superbly structured and truly a reflective piece lest one should become so full of hisself!
Best wishes as you compete!
bj
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