When the pain
of heartache ends
love
can live again.
A contest entry
- ~ Moving on ~ by Lavender Butterfly.
475 points, ended October 11, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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True!
I thought about it real quick, and the only thought that came to me was true!
After I thought about it real quick, I thought about it again long, and still came up with the same thing, so this poem is nice short and true! -
This reads very familiar to me, like something I've heard before. It's short yet reflective and leaves the reader with something to ponder.
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David
But why must we start at the backend? Does make me wonder poet.
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Simply said, but the truth is often beautifully simple, isn't it?
Well said, poet.
Best of luck in the contest
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Oh I hope so... x
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Nice one David, and oh so true. A few words often say more then a tirade.
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