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Sad and Lonely Girl


this pretty girl,
  she's always falling down.
i think i just fell in love with her
but she wont remember.

i could always find her at
the bottom of a plastic cup.
drowning in drunk sincerity.
A sad and lonely girl!


Quit crying your eyes out,
babe come on
Isn't there something familiar about me?

The past is only the future with the lights on.
Please, stop crying your eyes out.


But all she said was
"I think we're running out of alcohol.
Tonight, I hate this fucking town.
All my best friends will be the death of me.
But they won't remember.
Please, take me away!
Before I melt in to the ground.
All my words get used against me."

Such a sad and lonely girl.

Quit crying your eyes out..please
The past is just the future with the lights on.

Please baby, quit your crying.

Author notes

This is dedicated to an absolutely stunning woman, Emmi. She is my best friend, and I have seen her used and broken by so many guys. BUT the guy who ends up with her, will not only be the luckiest guy alive, but the happiest. She is intelligent, and purely amazing.

Emmi~~ please stop that crying...you know how much I hate to see you cry. I just..i hate it. And it's all you seem to do. You are a strong beautiful woman, and when the right man comes, you'll know exactly who it is!! So many guys have hurt you and I want to kill all of them. You are a true angel, and the right man will see right through your tears and see how special you are!!

sad and lonely girl by +44, one of her favorite songs

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  • SlowlyBreathing
    October 28
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    So sweet of you, that is absolutely adorable.
    And I completely agree with it all, ever single word you wrote.
    Every single one...


  • KnightOfTheRose gold member
    October 10

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    "Please baby, quit your crying." Yes, she does need to stop crying all those guys who did that too her aren't worth her tears. She'll find the one for her I have no doubt.



    -Steve-


  • shattered.frisco
    October 10

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    ok, I've like, never had a poem like this dedicated to me! I'm crying now! But cuz it was so beautiful. And what you said in your AN...thank you. I don't believe it but thank you so much. this meant the world to me

    emmi