She wrote this poem
on a napkin,
then used it
to wipe away
my most obscene verbs.
A contest entry
- Being Brautigan's Brain Again by Odds and Ends.
1100 points, ended November 9, 2009, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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the title is what was the most amazing thing about the piece. i think it added the extra depth to the piece.
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Very often, with Brautigan, the title makes the piece. (I am thinking, for example, of Nice Ass:
"There is so much lost
and so much gained in
these words."
But, The Donner Party, Negative Clank, and Diet are all good examples of this, too.
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Congratulations on your well deserved gold.
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Congratulations, Scott. Well done. 
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Excellent, more than deserving! Congratulations on this little stunner.
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general consensus: you hit the mark on the style. well done!
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interesting
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This was a very well written short piece of work you have here. This was short. I enjoyed reading this. It was good. Keep up the amazing work.
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Ooh, I just love this! Short and gorgeous. Good luck in the contest!
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Classic Adelmann...
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I agree.
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This is perfect. If anyone knows Brautigan, you do.
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