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residue of an empty heart





yesterday's roses

become just dry ornaments against a cracked window





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prompt: "and so it's over" ; 10 words

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  • Mango Memories gold member
    October 14
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    God.


  • Not-The-Sun
    October 14

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    prompt: describe this poem, in 1 word or less





    beautiful







  • mysticstorm gold member
    October 11

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    Simply amazing!!!


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    October 11
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    fabulous imagery and depth... x


  • Ken-Maverick
    October 10

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    So much is said in these few words,
    wonderfully penned as always buddy.
    All the best.

    Ken


  • Randomly Beautiful
    October 10

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    What a great image.


  • February Moon gold member
    October 10

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    This is beautiful. It's stark, and yet has so much emotion. I love it.

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