my secret to sanity ~
alone inside the walls
that never speak a word.
it's the silence that heals
but can also break the heart;
and I have been some place in between...
I saw my life here
in the fumes of seclusion ~
so I exhaled until I was set free.
Author notes
Image credit: "Alive Out of Habit" by lorelix04
A contest entry
- Click 63. by perfectsunset.
625 points, ended October 24, 14 entries
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Comments
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Wonderful job here.. I love the ending...
"I saw my life here
in the fumes of seclusion ~
so I exhaled until I was set free."
I've missed you! Haven't seen you in awhile
Amber

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A simple beauty you have penned here.
Very well-composed and such a
true piece of compostion!
Loved it!
Best of luck & thanks for entering




