How does that song go? She's my brown I girl? I know now what it means, for you are MY brown eyed girl and the love of my life. You eyes are so deep yet so pure, They lift me high when the B.S. life hands out pulls me down. You're arms hold me so soft and sweet, you're smile warms me on a cool December day and when you're face is pained I can't help but feel pained as well. As brown eyes may be the most common, they are certainly the most beautiful.
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You're arms hold me so soft and sweet, you're smile warms me on a cool December day and when you're face is pained I can't help but feel pained as well.
~ all of the "you're"s in this sentence should be "your"
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