I love the way you look at me
When you think I'm not aware.
I love the way you talk to me
And show how much you care.
I love the way you hold me,
You make me feel secure.
I love the way you back me up-
Make me reassured.
I love the way you kiss me,
Those soft gentle kisses.
I love the way you seem to be
The answer to my wishes.
I love the way you look into my eyes,
That everlasting stare.
I love the way you whisper sweet nothings,
Makes me feel as if I'm floating on air.
I love the way
You love me like you do,
But most of all I love the way
You made me fall in love with you.
Author notes
i love jerry so much! he means the world to me!!!! x's n o's to him!
Written February 4th, 2004
A contest entry
- Come and win 308 points by KermitsWoman.
308 points, ended September 27, 2005, 7 entries
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thank you for entering and good luck in the contest with this strongly love filled write
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very good! loved it. Full of emotion and was jsut what i was looking for good luck x
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I am one on this contests entries, but I am sure you will get something because this is brilliant!
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oh my gosh this is soooo cute! thank you soo much for entering!!! good luck!
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Nice love poem...rhymes real nice too...you go gyrl........
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Great job On winning I really liked your poem it is so good I wish I had someone to love me like that I used to I push people away your lucky to have such a good boyfriend
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I don't applaud ever one but i thought this peice earnd it
keep the ink flowing
kisses and hugs
~~Sara~~
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Hi there! I liked this. It sounded very lyrical
Could have been a greeting card for a lover! You expressed some good emotion and feeling about love in here. I really appreciate your entry. Good Luck!!!
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Great!
Wow, I love the way you wrote this. It shows all of your emotion. I love the way you ended this poem with "I love the way
You love me like you do,
But most of all I love the way
You made me fall in love with you." Because that is truly the best way you could have ended this poem. I loved it, good job.. keep writing!And thanks for reading and applauding my poem. -
oOOh. So sweeT. That's Cute man. I like the way you rhymed and it flowed pretty good. . . kirbysman said the rhythm was uneven but whatever. I thought it sounded cool. Pce *Juice*
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Italian Hi.
Very nice work here, so sweet the way you write! Thank you for your entry.
Rock on...Aimee Jo -
Pretty good thoughts and ideas in this and the rhyming is generally good, but the rhythm is uneven in a lot of spots and makes it difficult to read and detracts from the beauty of the write. Paul
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A very flowing style in this poem. I believe that is because you used repetition in "I love the way..." Like swcaitlin, this very much so reminded me of my boyfriend also! Those little thigns... they mean so much!
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This was quite sweet and reminds me so much of my own boyfriend. Great write, I really liked it and I wish I could get into words what you have. Excellent job, keep up the great work!
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amazing
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this was great i really like this and can relate love how it rhyme's the flow is great
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Wow, what happy feelings radiate from this poem! This is really beautiful. Makes me glad to see someone else can express the simplicities of love like I do! Thanks for sharing this, it is great! Love to see more!
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This is a wonderful love poem. The words flow well. It is a very comforting poem, you convey the emotion of love easily.
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WOW, this is a great, sweet and lovely poem. There is alot of feeling of love and happiness put into this and thats great to express emotion in poetry. Well anyways it rhymed well and flowed well too. So keep it up and best wishes to you! ~~**
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