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Two Lonely Souls

 

 

 

The comfort and warmth of his companionship

a peaceful meshing of two lonely souls

time and space having no consequence

whispers of affections carefully held-

given out as crumbs fed to hungry birds

 

 

Cherishing all time spent together

remembering the laughter of my heart

emotional resuscitation received

bringing love’s hope and promise back to life-

the rain conveniently conceals tears of

prior heartaches hidden from day’s light

 

 

Faith let me believe his sweetly frosted words

calming my fears of never-ending failures

purity of emotions softly cascaded

down and through eagerly awaiting ears

lightly grazing past soft open lips

 

 

 

-a secret promise between two lonely souls

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    October 29

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    excellent

    This made me want to cry...........
    Penned so beautiful and tugged at the heartstrings
    Please forgive me for not commenting sooner
    Been so sick with a virus
    Hugs
    Your sis
    Susan~~~

    P S This should definitely a winner in my book
    Hugs
    Susan~


  • Desire gold member
    October 14

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    Wow~

    This swells the eyes~
    Sniffle Sniffle~
    You trying to get me to create Waterfalls huh
    Powerful Imagery but also Emotions...
    the secret promise~
    between two lonely souls...

    Oh My~ You take me there Precious One

    Have I told You lately that I Love You
    Just teach me how to write...
    Okies...Geesh
    You can write of Love it smells like
    and I write, it smells like

    Keep that quill dancing
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart Beautiful
    Best wishes in all You do~
    with love & light~ Desire~*~


  • silent28mystery
    October 11

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    U never fail to amaze me with ur work.
    the picture again is most inspiring.
    the way u come up with the interpretations and notions of the pictures gives a stronger life to the pictures.

    Cherishing all time spent together
    remembering the laughter of my heart
    emotional resuscitation received
    bringing love’s hope and promise back to life-
    the rain conveniently conceals tears of
    prior heartaches hidden from day’s light
    - loved these lines, the wording as well as the thought evoking out of it: hope is always the way to return to life but not to forget the pain, rather to hide it to live on.
    great rea


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    October 10

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    Oh sweetie You express your feelings
    so eloquently. You are so talented and
    wonderful. I could go on, but you know
    how great I know you are. Beautifully
    written as you always do.